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slish slash.....

Slish Slash Blood Runs Black
                                Shay Abyss


Slish slash her wrist spit blood once more
Crash goes the razor on the floor
The floor covered with blood and hate
She sits there and yells to herself
What did she do to deserve this?
He walks in the room and screams
For it is now her last day
In his arms she lays
His hands covered with blood
Her wrist screaming for help
He runs to the phone and dials 911
She screams that its alright it was
Time for her to go and she holds the knife
Puts it over her stomach
Swings for her chest
Again the knife drops back into place
On the floor
As blood runs black
He runs out of the house
Flooded with tears but not wanting
To be there when they arrived to remove her
He rushes to the diner and looks at
The  girl waiting and says
“Its all your fault” 

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  • wow. this is great! it had me locked to the screen the whole time. very deep and emotional

    • shayabyss
      October 12
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      oh thx that means alot to
      me i wrote this on a lonley day
      thx tho XD