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...flame...

a flame...

small and solitary…

flickering in darkness...

frightened for light...

a flame...

and soon a big fire...

light in a life full of darkness...

is makes it outside less bleak...

a flame full of strenght...

dancing…

in the restless night…

do not be frightened…

he waits…

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  • If I was a ghost
    October 11
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    How you explained the fire here, how it glows and burns, it kinda gives hopes too to us...