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...nature...

I sit in tailors sit in the grass…

my eyes closed…

listening to the rhythm of my heart…

I sit in tailors sit on the sand…

my eyes closed…

the sea rustles in front of me…

the golves slosh wildly against the rocks…

but for them I am inaccessible…

I sit in tailor tailors sit on the moss…

trees are standing all around me…

if it blows…

it look like they are talking to me...

a gentle breeze caresses my body…

whereas I listen...

towards the rhythm of my heart

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  • If I was a ghost
    October 11

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    it's like feeling the beauty of nature here, like you said how the wind caresses you, the silence and how it brings you peace...