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I Once Thought You Were A Good Friend

I once thought you were a good friend
I wasn't quite sure where we would end
But I thought you would be honest with me
Even if this wasn't truly meant to be

Now I look back on all the times you played
These manipulative games (all just to get laid?!)
Not trusting people was always my character flaw
But for you, I let the ice around my heart thaw

I let you in, let you make a mess around here
Let you break through this brick wall of fear
And, all the while, you were counting the time
Before, into me, I would let you climb

Thank you for reminding me of the simple fact
That when people are nice, it's all just an act
I don't think I'll ever be able to trust again
And to think, I once thought you were a good friend

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