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Dreaming

As she wraps her arms around his neck
the song plays soft and slow.
She can feel the glare of every girl in the room thinking
'why can't that be me'
Her Prince slowly wraps his big hands around her tiny waist,
she slowly starts to rest her head on the broad
shoulder she has dreamed of....
she waits to be denied the shoulder as a hand is removed
from her waist and replace on her chin.
he lifts her hed her head up and starts to whisper
those three little words
she always wished he would... until...

she's woken out of a dead sleep.

Her alarm clock is screaming at her; mocking her;
as she wishes for a better tomorrow.

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  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    October 13
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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Don't we all just hate that; life does get better eventually

    This is an excellent poem of dreams and longing, though it was a little hard to read against the background, a small suggestion might be to bold the poem ? Just a suggestion

    Well penned

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  • MontanaAshli
    October 12

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    Nice.

    I think this poem is very nice. Ive had those dreams where you feel so in-love, and everything is perfect, and then you wake up. It really sucks!! I think you did a good job. good luck.