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Flow

Placid waters

Subtle deep

Flowing as verse

Collectively

Running raging

Dominating

Current staging

Living brevity

Forever knowing

Course of way

Continue flowing

Reaching ocean's fray...

 c2008 vduna

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  • Patpowersnoshoepoet gold member
    October 12

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    Thanks again Victor. What a way to express how you feel in this. This was quite touching to read. Take care.