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Dancing Leaves




autumn leaves dancing
and swirling in the crisp wind
sun’s rays pirouette




Words: K.Botka
10/12/08

Author notes

I love the colors & the rhythm & rhyme of fall & how the sun can play off the leaves as they dance & swirl!

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  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    October 13

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    A very nice Haiku and draws a beautiful picture of Autumn.
    Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
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