The hand that strikes
with indiscretion
can leave you so blind.
As it's abuse he likes
his obsession's
occupy's space in my mind.
Author notes
LOOK CLOSELY AT THE PICTURE!
A contest entry
- Abuse?.... by Black-abyss.
540 points, ended November 10, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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nice pict! (i can see the hand)
it's a cut and short poem, just not wat i'm looking for
srry
thanx 4 the enter though!
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