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Dreams

Your voice to me is suicidal.
Your breath is like a gentile breeze.

You haunt me in my dreams,

But do as you please.

The sound of your words helps me so.

They help me know I'm not alone.

Your warm embrace.

Your thoughts spoken for only my ears.

It all helps my though the days.

I'll be queit.

I'll let you sleep.

I'll be as quiet as your soul could be.

I want to you know.

I'm here now and forever.

Just please stay here with me.

 

Your voice to me is suicidal.

You put my soul as ease.

Soon my love,

Your eyes will open.

I promise I'll be there.

The first thing you see upon opening them.

I'm there.

I only ask one thing for you,

and thats to keep your promise.

Because I love you too

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  • XXheartbroken3XX
    October 13

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    nice peom...
    very visual..
    loved it...
    keep it up.
    p.s you have some spelling errors
    eg. I'll be queit. <--- should be i'll be quiet.
    gentile breeze <--- should be: gentle breeze
    I want to you know <-- is that meant to be i want you to know.???
    It all helps my though the days <--- through the days.
    um i think thats all...
    but yea the poem was great!!

    • lol, thanks. I don't really check my spelling much. If you seen anything else please let me know.