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diez

expressionist.

 

this is being able to

look at a beach

and refuse to swim

 

- other ways of fun

outside of sand:

 

castles

like choices

Loeffler luxury

or self-acceptance

 

impressionist.

 

or another or:

juggle both

like water could be held

in Ravel's fountains -

 

it can

 

you are the wave

a beckon towards nature

and causality

 

- motion

never pauses for long

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Dedicated to: Jackieeeeeeeee (yes, I do like to draw out vowels !)
aka kiwigirljacks (okay, that was an unnecessary 'aka', who the hell doesn't know who she is? )

"Loeffler luxury"-As in Loeffler Randall boots.
Couldn't help myself there.

Jeux d'eau - Ravel
I'm trying to learn how to play it...tough shit.
Probably one of my favorite piano compositions ever.




You

And yes...the décimo (10th!!!) one.

In a list

We need to share donuts.

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Comments

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  • FivebyFive
    October 12

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    Wow. Is good.

    Why'd you call it diez? Just wondering.


    "expressionist.



    this is being able to

    look at a beach

    and refuse to swim



    - other ways of fun

    outside of sand:



    castles

    like choices

    Loeffler luxury

    or self-acceptance"

    Best part.

    -Marissa


    • notorious
      October 12
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      I guess you don't read AN's,
      but it's the 10th (diez=ten in Spanish, you totally knew that!!!) poem I've written for Jackieeeee.

      I kind of thought the second part was better than the first, but coolness.

      Thanks.

  • sheltered
    October 12
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    Nice picture you drew here
    even though some of the words were
    beyond my mealy noggin.


    • notorious
      October 12
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      Aw thank you
      Which words
      were "beyond"
      your mealy noggin?

      LMAO
      I didn't use
      anything pretentious!!!

      LoL

      • sheltered
        October 12
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        you did explain all the pretentious words out
        for us little people so that's good... lol

  • balenciaga silver member
    October 12

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    love fountains juggling water ; and waves beckoning .

    this is tres bien, tres tres bien .


    roo.

    .


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 12

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    Woot! You'll have a list all for her soon More boots¿ Doesn't she have enough on her wish list¿ A wonderful dedication to a beautiful soul hun


    • notorious
      October 12
      Edit | Reply
      Hmm, good idea...
      I already have enough lists though!!
      LMAO

      Boots rock!!!

  • account disabled
    October 12

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    since you learn to play I’d try to tune your piano first
    not that I’ll ever touch the keyboard to show you how
    I’m chewing on the partiture now:

    Ravel fountains

    the expressionist went
    to the beach today
    hands tied at the back
    in a refuse to swim
    there must be some
    another way
    of having fun
    outside of sand

    castles
    like choice’s luxury
    Loeffler to help the effort
    of self shattered acceptance

    impressions
    or another or
    had juggled both
    like water could
    in fountains
    waves
    that would be hold
    causal in endless
    never long Ravel fountains


    • notorious
      October 12
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      Actually, you're right--my piano probably hasn't been tuned for over six months.

      Your comments rock.

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 12

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    How fabulously arty!!!!

    Awesome definition of expressionist... that is totally me, you know me and my beach thing well

    Well damn yes!!! That's my kinda fun!! Get m some of them boots!!!

    "self-acceptance" a treasure indeed.. one I continually strive for.

    I always feel like I'm juggling... lol... well lots of things...

    Sounds like an amazing composition - Ravel.. to be compared to that in any small way has gotta be good!!


    "you are the wave
    a beckon towards nature" <=== man, that's just.. bloody amazing

    You know me chicka, never pause for too long.. always gotta be onwards and upwards right?

    This so much!!!!!! You are just too good to me!

    I love it!! And of course.. you!


    ♥


    • notorious
      October 12
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      Yeah, mostly 'cause I hate beaches too (except the hot dogs, can't forget about those hot dogs )

      Yesss, it is such a coolio piano piece, and the French translation (excuse the pretentiousness) is "Fountains" or "Water Games"--fun, fun, fun. It's pretty.

      Heh. Another one to put under my name on your awesome-o page.

      !
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