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From New York City


Our boss he is American
He hails from New York City
He drives a Toorak tractor
Which is really such a pity

He comes to work most every morn
Just hitting half past eight
We’re suppose to start at seven
Man, we think our boss is great

He dishes out a daily work
Like he isn’t there at all
He tells us all just where to go
In his New York City drawl

He’s always got a smile for us
And tales to make us laugh
And other stories that he tells
That makes you want to barf

We get so many weeks a year
For holidays you see
But our boss has used ten years worth
And he’s only been here three


He hates to work indoors all day
The computer drives him mad
We call him out for some small thing
And for that he’s really glad

Sometimes when he is sitting there
At lunchtime, he is snoring
When someone yells, hey boss wake up
It’s New York City calling

He rushes out to grab the phone
We’re sitting there all beaming
There’s no one on the other end
He comes back in all steaming

Oh what such fun we have each day
Our boss is something great
We think he’s tops, the best of all
He really is our mate

So that you see is our small ode
Our special little ditty
To someone who we love so much
That hails from New York City













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  • light insight silver member
    October 19

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    Creative

    As I read this I was humming some kind of diddy and it never dawnwd me that it was the one from NewYork city. Very clever and very entertaing.


  • paw-writer silver member
    October 17

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    I love this poem! The rhythm and rhyme is truly amazing, and the imagery you have used helps me to very clearly picture the boss and his personality. Very humorous write, and I enjoyed this poem very much this fine morning here. Blessings, Patty

  • Striders Bar - silver member
    October 17

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    Superb

    Ah, 'tis a fine write, indeed. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us.

  • Flashlight Cop
    October 16

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    This is rally cute and I like the rhyme. It made me giggle. I am so glad that you have a boss that you like Being in security I have SEVERAL bosses and Supervisors, and I havnt found a one of them that I dont like. Some I like more than others but in the end they are all great! Keep up the good work. *clappy

    • condor gold member
      October 16
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      Thanks, mate. It was a quick poem i wrote out of the blue.

  • iwuzrite silver member
    October 14
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    This was really GREAT! The flow was smooth and easy to read!


  • Beret55 silver member
    October 13
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    You always have good rhyme and flow. And i love the way you tell a story.


  • DolceVito gold member
    October 13

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    Very good

    Good job. I like a rhyming poem that tells a story.
    Deserving
    Vito


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    October 12

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    Another excellent write from you Well done


  • rbruce gold member
    October 12

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    Very well done . Almost doggeral but much longer. The rhythm, flow and rhyme is as near as dammit to being perfect. I love the tale it tells too. An excellent piece of writing.

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