When you said, "I love you,"
I went over the moon.
My heart sang its glory,
The stars sang in tune.
As when with a word
God brought forth light,
So with these words
You ended my night.
So with these words
You made something new:
A bond of devotion
Between me and you.
How powerful words
To shape who we are!
We ponder in silence;
Our words cross a bar.
Your words crossed a threshold
And entered the past,
Yet they have created
A world that will last.
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cindy i don't care about our past, just please get back with me
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that is how i felt when cindy said those words, only for her to regret saying them
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She regretted saying 'I love you' to you? Then maybe you gotta rethink about this whole relationship... Even if you truly love her, you can't expect the other party to feel the same way...and sometimes, it's better to let go than keep holding on. It leaves a better memory this way. Sad but true
But it's a great poem nonetheless
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