Close your eyes and dream your lies
Find your bliss in bitter cries
Unwind the wounding words of hope
The dream of peace is just rope
To hang you
Iron clad dreams, now rusting and rotten
Whispers and dreams, long since forgotten
Words of Love, hanging on stale breath
Waiting for the kiss of Death
To free me
Juxtaposed by my damnation
Carnal needs, led to confrontation
And now I wait, in the eaves of despair
While you go on, without a care
You lied
Revenge is sweet it shall be mine
I'll sit back and bide my time
And when you think I'll never be back
That's when I'll launch my attack
And destroy you....
Now Fuck Off!
Please tell me what you think
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Patience is a virtue that I was taught but refused to learn! And I dont want to Fuck off, sides I cant, I am your sister and have to be here to annoy the crap ouuta you and Bell! :
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Killer
Now this is just a vintage pissed off poem and I love it bro. its amazing how someone cna be pisse doff to the extreme limitations of their own shelled in anger and wlel once that boils over and out of its hsell look out people because this guy has hit the insanity level of anger. any ways great write love the flow and contrast to this write. keep up the good work =)
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The thing about me Tiger, is if I got that pissed off, I could kill a man, then sit and eat a meal next to his blood stained body, while still smiling.
Glad you liked this write, and thanks for the comment.
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hmm
this doesnt seem at all like you were pissed at all...
(in case you didnt get it which im sure you did, sarcasm )
either way i think this was very well written, and patience is indeed a virtue, my friend
~Rena
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Thanks Rena
I wasn't pissed off...much
Patience, is a virtue..and one I'm slowly coming to learn to have...
Glad you enjoyed this, and thanks for the coment.
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I like the last stanza you put in this poem, waiting, biding your time until the right time to strike, to cast fear into the other persons heart. Well done
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Thanks Bell
People think because I don't rush into a reaction, that I won't do anything...Oh how wrong can they be...It's time to stop thinking with my fists and start using that excuse for grey matter.
Glad you like this write, and thanks for commenting
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