every day i see his face...
i want to hit him, but i can't...
i didn't tell anyone,
what he did to me...
years of complete silence...
i'm sick of it...
don't want to be silent anymore...
too long i've hide it for everyone...
feeling so dirty...
but i have to go through...
it's difficult...
i'm going to tell them soon...
but i'm afraid they wouln't believe me...
nobody would believe it...
i'm lonely in my feelings...
and i see him everyday...
he's my father...
i hate him...
he has to move away...
i don't want to see him...
i want to hit him...
but then he will punish me,
and he already is doing that...
everytime when i see his face...
i want to cry,
but the tears are frozen...
i want to scream, but my
voice is gone...
please help me survive this awfull mess...
save me from him...
please...
A contest entry
- Silent All These Years (for rape and sexual assault survivors) by SerenityNChains.
1750 points, ended November 9, 50 entries
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Your words are really moving.
I know you're in pain and it's hard but you need to tell somebody what you're going through so that you can be 'saved from him'
I know we don't know each other but I can relate to your pain so if you want to talk I'll gladly listen
x x x
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Good.
"i want to cry,
but the tears are frozen...
i want to scream, but my
voice is gone..."
That is my favorite part. Good job! -
Good emotional work on this. Not easy to write this but I admire your courage. Thanks again.
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This is already a very good piece- I like the emotional intensity and the free flow of thoughts... It's so real that you almost got me a moment back there.
Great job! -
thats good then to write that strong and be non relevant to you is a sign of a very good poet
only thing that concerns me is you say its non fiction
that person who its about needs help and fast
make sure you help him/her out as much as you ca -
ouch
ouch this is sooo powerful
you should tell someone whats happened
try with people who would trust you to be honest no matter what, show them proof if needed
just don't go through ut alone
your dad seems to have got to your head big time
but remember mentally strong conquers all
believe that it will get better and it will do
awesome poem just shame about the cause...
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it's not my story, i've write it but it's non fiction... my father didn't do that to me... my father only left me... it's just for a contest
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