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i want you to miss me

i want you to miss me
is that a crime
it makes me want to sit here
it makes me rhyme

i want you to miss me
mean the words i love you
hopefully i'll be free
and the words mean true,

i want you to hold me
so tender so true
i want you so much
please be my boo

i want you to hold me
all through the night
together we are peaceful
no need for fights

i want you to kiss me,
with those lips of gold
we can last together
even when we're old

i want you to kiss me
give me time in a crisis
your face is so comforting
your lips are like hypnosis

i want you to want me,
why can't this be?
one love lasts forever
its there from me

i want you to want me,
oh how peaceful the sight
if we got together,
id know i was right,

i want you to care
and be there my friend
until one of us goes
in a tragic end

i want you to care
be my help when i'm down
if you say you will be there
i could not frown

i want you to love me
say you feel the same
we could get married
and share each others pain

Author notes

i actually cried when i wrote this

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what do you think should i show cindy?

    I plan to revise this poem, please leave constructive criticism!
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  • char13
    October 12

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    This is so awfully heartrending.. I feel like crying myself

    Yes, show her. If you really love her that much, let your poetry do the talking for you- you'll win her over.

    All the best yeah! X)