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My Love I must admit
that everything about you
sets my heart to race.

This is how I perceive
that you are my true love.

I can see it in your eyes
as they look deeply into mine,
your orbs full of passion and love.

Your eyes show me Heaven
each time they gaze upon me.

With lips that taste like
heavenly dew, I can hear
your words that are spoken
from your heart.

"I Love You."

Spoken with the truest
of feelings that comes
from deep down inside.

Our hearts beat as one,
we are joined
for this is right.

This love that carries
two souls comes only once,
when it's written in the stars.

These arms that holds
one so very precious.

For it does not matter
if we are near, as it is
the heart that picks its mate.

Yes, there is true love out there.
All one has to do is really seek it
to comprehend that it is there.

We will make our own paradise,
our special place among mortals,
so close, that the chorus of angels
will lift our spirits.

It is there where I am surrounded
by your loving embrace.

I want it to last my lifetime
and even more, just the two of us.

I wish to be closer to you, my love.


Author notes

Prompts:

1. All you need is love
3. Love finally found me.
4. Love is in the air.
6. Love the things you do.
7. Love will find a way.
9. Love you all the way.

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  • A very beautiful and touching piece by a beautiful mind. Thank you for your loving entry in this contest.


  • DLC-Jem
    October 12

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    Again dear sister your words melt from the page, and I don't read you often enough.

    Love and light

    Jem xxxx


  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 12
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    god, this is..

    wow! beautiful, touching..gentle and heartfelt. outstanding lady!


  • Mama
    October 12

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    This is just beautiful my friend. Sorry I have not been around, but I will call you to let you know why later.

    Your heart really spoke out here.

    Blessing to you.

    K.R.


  • Ken-Maverick gold member
    October 12

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    Rifkin Rifkin...
    What can i say,
    you pulled it off slendidly, thats for sure
    So touching, so heartfelt,
    i feel your emotions with every line
    Just awesome

    Good luck in the comp

    Ken

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