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Wild Honey And Dew

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            mother spellbound and cast out by the sea,
            the winter light teases the lantern
            the scent of the waves in hues of amber
            turned grey by the silver twilight
            strong arms save me from going after he

            this heart drowns in the noonday sun
            she whispers to me blatantly
            swallowed the salt tears down my throat
            sipping green tea till I turn my back,
            waiting for her to come back...

            lost by the footsteps misleading in the sandbar
            dunes echo without her dreaming
            cannot swim to touch the moonlit horizon
            she went under that last night of May
            surrounded by our love, lost in the bay

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  • Angelflower Greeters member
    October 27

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    Wonderful imagery with beautiful metaphors. well done. thank you very much for sharing. best of luck in the contest.


    Angel
  • I love the title! I'm assuming that the title came from the line in "Meadows Of Heaven"? As a fellow Nightwish fan, I can pick these things out But you have done that one line such justice, as the imagery in here is epic, as is the song.

    Well done