Tell me
Tell me how much you hate me
Tell me what made you pretend
Pretend to love me
Pretend to care
Pretend that you didn't love her
Her, with the glossy hair
Her radient smile
Her supernal unnatural beauty
So much like yours
Your beauty
So inhuman
So exquisite
Like that of a angel
I should of known
I should of realised
I should of asked myself why
Why you make me feel like this
You are the daggers in my gut
Vicious
Brutal
Savage
The air caught in my throat
My blocked lungs
Everything you do rips out my heart
Again
And again
Every stare
Every time you say those three words
Every act
And thats all it is
An act
An act so predictable
An act which I believed
You truly are
The Greatest Actor
Author notes
I really enjoyed writing this. About the overactive, sensitive thoughts of a teenage girl.
Comments
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So TRU!!!
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Relatable
Love just sucks sometimes. Your peice relates the way that so many are forced to feel so often. Love should be pure, not brutal. your words are powerful. truly, they are
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Great!
Wow this is really good. I like how you used the title as the last line. It sounds very good. I also like the words you used. Such as vicious, brutal, savage. Really good.
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