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Flavored Milk

Saucers *
Hold
Milk

And
"Fly
Thru
The
Air
With
The
Greatest
Of
Ease" **

Coded
Flashes
They
Do
Send

Yes
We
Are
Your
Friends ***

Author notes

Written in a favorite coffee shop, 1/08/2008 DCK

For information about unusual saucers, just click on this Google Link:
* http://www.google.com/search?sourceid=navclient&ie=UTF-8&rls=RNWO,RNWO:2008-24,RNWO:en&q=%3CFlying+Saucers%3E

** http://lyricsplayground.com/alpha/songs/t/themanontheflyingtrapeze.shtml

*** http://www.geocities.com/Hollywood/Studio/3469/encounters.html

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 13
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    Interesting piece here

    Very unique piece indeed

    • Striders Bar - silver member
      November 13
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      Thank you for your comment; compliment and applause. I do appreciate them.

  • Woodchuck4400 silver member
    October 15

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    Nice job. I like the ideas that you put forth in your poems. They are always interesting and thougtful reads.

    Mike

    • Striders Bar - silver member
      October 15
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      Thank you for your compliments, and applause. I hope you had an opportunity to click on the URL's (footnotes) and read those as well. Have a good evening, my friend.
  • davidwright silver member
    October 13

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    Makes one wonder about this place we call the universe and the secrets it holds. Good write. Happy trails
    • Striders Bar - silver member
      October 13
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      Aye, it does. Thanks for the compliment. Hope you enjoyed the info on the links, which I provided. Hope you have a good day.

  • Sandygram silver member
    October 13

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    A Fun Write!!

    Now this one brought a smile. I got some fresh baked cookies to go with the milk. Take me to your leader.
    This was a delight to read on this gray overcast day in Penn. Take care.

    Sandy

    • Striders Bar - silver member
      October 13
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      Thank you for your humorous comment; compliments and applause; for I do appreciate them.

  • Gwenevere
    October 12
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    I meant Grin

  • Gwenevere
    October 12

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    HMMM!!!! now what flavour milk would it be I wonder.Perhaps it could be stirred with a Milky Way or a Mars *gtin*, loved it, Ros

    • Striders Bar - silver member
      October 12
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      Thanks for the humorous comment; compliment and applause. Yes, perhaps it could be a Milky Way Bar, or maybe an alien "Cosmoligical Kiss", wrapped in foil. After, all Hershey's Candy Factory might exist in outer space! Who knows? (LOL)
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