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The Dance of the Doubts

Time‘s been rough
My heart‘s been bruised
Still it feels right when we‘re together

The thought of you still makes me smile
Makes my heart beat faster
Makes me feel alive

And I got your arrow still in my heart
Wondering how that I survived
All this bleeding
But it‘s ok
I can look at you
Without anything negative on my mind

And the doubts keep dancing in my mind
But the music stops
When I see your face
The doubts keep dancing in my mind
But the music stops
When I see you

Things have changed
We‘re not the same
Still it feels right when we‘re together

The words you say still make my day
Make me feel special
Make me feel beautiful

And I got your mistakes still on my mind
Wondering how that I breathe
After all this pain
But it‘s ok
I can talk to you
Without anything negative slipping from my tongue

And the doubts keep dancing in my mind
But the music stops
When I see your face
The doubts keep dancing in my mind
But the music stops
When I see you

Don‘t tell me you need me
Don‘t tell me you seek me
I might get used to it
And then lose you another time

Don‘t tell me you need me
Don‘t tell me you seek me
I might get used to it
And then lose you another time

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  • greengable
    October 12

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    OK!

    It reads a bit like a song and it is full of stuffy platitudes. But I read it and it IS a poem. Well done.