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Hugs, Kisses, and Death Wishes

[Just Walk Away]
I don't need you anymore,
you're not worth fighting for.
I never thought I'd see the day-
When I gave up on you and walked away.
This is the end
it'll be too soon if I never see you again.
I'm done with this life and everything you've brought;
I'm tired of trying to make it right after every time we've fought.
[Please Don't Try to Stay]
I'm done with everything you put me through,
now there's nothing left to prove.
I can't play these games forever,
when we clearly aren't meant to be together.
So I'll stand back and watch you leave,
but it's quickly becoming harder to breathe.
But there's no circle that is more vicious,
than "x" and "o" turned to death wishes.

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  • evilangel311
    October 14
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    I love it

    I love the flow and your word choice, i love the poem in general, great job =]]