in unspoken echoes
of inorganic music
regal eyes reflecting
a beauty nameless
silent explosions of stillness
unclamed treasures
awaiting kisses of fire
the touches
of a kindred soul
in alignment of
thought, will, and love
forging chaos into
a paradise
if only for
the heartbeats
of a sigh
in a purpose more...
Author notes
8. When love comes knocking.
For Lauren
In a list
A contest entry
- Love, Love, Love by Karl Weiss - Topaz.
1750 points, ended October 13, 13 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love, love, love this and congrats on the shiny, it has such poise and grace
lol
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lovely=)
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Love, Love, Love ...
makes the knock resound!
Love
Always Myra
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beautiful
creates a warm, peaceful feeling
veeery good
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Awesome picture! I love how you aligned the poem to show the two different genders, and then you unite them: a paradise! Well done.
. Rewarded 4
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A wonderful piece, thank you for this fine entry in the contest.
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Bravo Allan, a most pensive and poignant piece indeed.
Three bunnies for you sir.
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Lovely
Quite a song weaving beauty. Kisses of fire forging...
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best wishes in the contest
Passions
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so lovely. Somehow in a matter of a few words, you have created the feeling, the beauty of love.
blessings and love,
Michelle
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This is absolutely gorgeous. The layout accents it perfectly and I must say it is one of the best poems I've read today
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