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He loved her

He loved her more than Romeo did Juliet
maybe it was her etiquette,
was it all in vain
or did it just cause the pain?

More than words can say
and in every kind of way,
and even more than Shakespeare did writing
because it was just so exciting.

Author notes

This is the 1st poem I ever wrote back in high school circa 1990...
Written January 1st, 1990

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  • Methadone Pretty
    November 19, 2004
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    i luv this poem!!!!
    da way u hav releted 2 shakespeare adds the feeling of love
    this is really good
    Congrats!
    XxelmojonesxX
  • Pinkbats
    February 4, 2004
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    Very nice.I love it but it kind of leaves me hunging witch I like as well it lets me mind flow on what kind of love they had and also makes me wonder what happpen to her or there love?