You couldn't take that feeling inside
It's been so long, you can't even cry
If only you could see his face
Shit Alice, his a disgrace
He has been doing meth
With that one guy, you know Seth
He will never amount to anything
Oh yeah, he wants back his ring
He wants to sell it at the pawn shop
Boy that money will make him on top
He has to buy his dope
Otherwise he just can't cope
He said you were never the one for him
He had a fuck on the side, her name is Corrine
That's fucked up right?
Well now that he is out of sight
Maybe you can move one with your life
Shit you never really wanted to be his wife
He left you for Crystal meth
He will probably always do it, even in death
Author notes
Dana, when you read this your going to think it's about you and Chris but it's not...Well maybe it is, I don't know.
Written February 20th, 2004
A contest entry
- Drug Addiction by isa.
300 points, ended April 13, 2004, 35 entries
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this is sad and defenitly heartfelt. it's also feels very true(if that makes any sense) i like the structure to it and the general vibe.
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very heartfelt piece, i hope youfriend realizes what she is doing... my friends are the ones who got me to quit useing drugs. friends have a very powerful influence on eachother. you can help her...you need to. thank you entering my contest. good luck.
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anger anger anger
i can feel the rage in this poem. its awesome i love to read a good mad poem. it rules! lol it was very well done and just all over great. dont let a guy get u so mad though he doesnt deserve you if he could do something like that and he doesnt deserve to do this to you! -
This is a really good poem...I kidn of got confused, but that's cause I'm weird. good job -seby
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^^i agree. keep up the good work!
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very angry but enjoyable
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