addicted to love in your eyes
i lose myself completely
addicted to your beautiful charm i live
an endless dream
in a rosy dream castle
with Cinderella and sleeping beauty
and
her charming prince
whose kiss brought her back to life again
addicted to your magic journey
i ride, i swim
in the river and i almost drown
addicted to your beautiful charm
i lose myself completely
reading a poem
i live addicted to its endless charm
Author notes
Written March 17th, 2002
A contest entry
- Drug Addiction by isa.
300 points, ended April 13, 2004, 35 entries
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A milion blessing oh you who believe.
I think this poem is like a door within a door and I will attempt to open it if God grants me grace to be so direct. Thank you for such a great muse as you will see when you read what I do with this. May God bless you for this. -
that was tight I like it and I find myself doing the same thing staring at ones picture and looking into their eyes and well you know
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very good...i like it much. it is a precious poem to you, i am sure...very well written and beautifully versed. great job.
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I agree, this is very nicely expressed. I throughly enjoyed!
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very nice write!
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