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Heroin Addiction

Miss Heroin is a bitch
a bitch that rips you from everything
nothing else matters than the needle in my arm
the substance that keeps me happy like a charm
Falling down to a pit in Hell
My heroin has got me in chains
though I love her so
I don't Wait to stop but in the end I know she'll kill me
insanity builds up
depression is catching up
I am a whore to my dealer and my pimp
I am nothing because of drugs
he injects me with the brown toxic poison
then rapes me plain to see
I don't mind because I feel so high
poison corrupts my child mind
never to break free this thing
I call my girlfriend, My love my sanity my life
Miss Heroin

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Written March 28th, 2004

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  • AgelessPain
    March 30, 2004
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    Thats really awesome...I love the way it is written...
    Well I kinda know what addiction is...since im addicted on some pain relief pills that contain morphine...same how it feels..
    Loved those lines:
    "then rapes me plain to see
    I don't mind because I feel so high
    poison corrupts my child mind
    never to break free this thing
    I call my girlfriend, My love my sanity my life
    Miss Heroin"
    Btw you got a great taste in music...
    Wael


  • isa
    March 29, 2004
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    Thank you so much for entering this contest. I really enjoyed your poem and good luck.
    -Isa

  • PolkaDot
    March 28, 2004
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    whoa...this rox...seriously, this was pretty awesome...great write...::still in awes::