If you hear me calling
please answer the phone.
My whole life seems to be in mourning
because thinking about you makes me feel so alone.
If you ever read my letters
please write back to me.
Why do you seem to feel feathers?
you always seem to turn your back on me!
If you ever decide to love again
please give me a call
My love is your love,
and I will give you my all.
Author notes
The sequel to my poem Regret inspired by the same women.
Written August 11th, 2000
A contest entry
- If You Go Away... by PVT Praters Girl.
400 points, ended November 1, 2004, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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yeah, i can really relate to this poem...wow. anyway to critique the poem, all i can say is excellent rhyme, fair meter, it was a very good write...almost brought a tear,....almost...thanks for sharing it.
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Hmmmmmm...this is something good! Its true that whenever you really love someone, no matter what, you will always be there waiting. I really liked this one!
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