Little child, I know you fell today.
I'm here to say that's okay.
I know you're hurting in your heart
And you feel we are apart.
I promised you I'd never leave.
All you need to do is believe.
Know my word is faithful and true.
I will never leave nor forsake you.
There is no need for you to hide your face.
Your sin is covered by my loving grace.
I know you will sometimes fall down
And feel unworthy of your crown.
This is why I gave my life for you,
Because I know what you cannot do.
There is no need to live with shame.
You are worthy to bear my name.
Author notes
'Hope comes from within'
In a list
A contest entry
- I Want Comforting Poems! by SHYFaith.
300 points, ended June 21, 2004, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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An enjoyable write...
An enjoyable write; there is no condemnation in Christ jesus, a message properly portrayed in this poem; nicely done. Perhaps you would like my poem "Waiting on You". --Joe -
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This is simply beautiful and I am so proud that you asked me to read it. This says it all. A fine write. I will come back to reread it because it means a lot to me. -
Thanks. but it's up to the judge. Check out the winners. Their poems were pretty good.
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Amazing, I can't believe this didn't at least get in the top 3
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this is amazing! really speaks to me! thanks for your comments on my work!
hugs! kaz xx -
Did you win with this, because it's excellent! Sometimes I do feel like I'm not worthy, though...nice write
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Brilliant write! Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering!
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Awesome.
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