"I'm facing my biggest fear,"
He said to me.
I was already hurting.
These words I did not need to hear.
"How does it feel to see me this way?"
He asked of me.
Hurt for him is what I felt.
"Sad" was all I could say.
The man with whom I could run 10 miles
And scale mountain peaks
Now, struggled to walk a few feet.
Memories of such days, now, did not bring smiles.
Seeing my dad weak and in pain,
Hurts me too much.
But though this is hard to bear,
I know our faith will not wane.
Through this fight for his life,
I'll be by his side,
And praying to my Lord:
"Comfort us. Save my father's life."
What outcome lies ahead for us?
It's beyond my control.
I simply do not know.
So in our Lord and Savior we place our trust.
Author notes
Every word is true. This is now hanging the hospital cancer ward and my dad's room. He is still living after 10 years.
Added for the contest below
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It was hard to choose a poem or a topic for this contest. Everyone of the choices are something for which I've written a poem. They are topics dear to my heart (except a symbol). I choose this one because a memory that left an impression stood out among the others. All the others were more of a passion of mine. This one involved a real event dear to my heart. I'll never forget walking the hospital halls with my dad after his surgery.
Written June 4th, 1994
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My mom had breast cancer, it is a horrible thing to watch a loved one go through.
I wish you and your family the best
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wow, a truley great poem, a first hand experience, heartfelt and sad, but even with all the saddness, there is faith in hopefullness.
i a thrilled to hear that your father is still alive, after 10 years no less!Thats why this contest is up, for the American Cancer Society, so ppl. have the chance to live the life they deserve.
great write, thankyou so much for entering.
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i can relate to your words from the deepness of my heart i pray you get the trust you need in your times of sadness this topic holds dear to my heart as i have nursed maney poeple with cancer and lost many friends and family with cancer good luck in the contest
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I can see where it must be hard, but I think you are doing well by focusing on spending time with him and writing poetry for him and/or about him. Every well spent moment can be a real joy.
I liked your poem. It seemed sincere and real. Good luck in the contest!
God Bless,
Anulka -
I truly understand how you are feeling, my sister was told that she had cervical and bowel cancer three weeks ago, resulting in a very long operation. I wish both you and your dad all the best and keep up the fight as I believe that its only when you give in to something that you lose
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I read your poem at least 5 times,It's heart wrenching I've lost words to say,just like you said - just place your trust in the lords hands,god bless, what a beautiful write!
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Not easy at all, my grandfather has lukemia, and it's difficult to see him there, tired and weak from the Kemo. I wish i could take it all away. I pray for him, same as you do. That's about all we can do. God is there. Trust in him. Great poem. Thank you for sharing. :'(
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I am 60 and I am lucky to still have my parents alive to cherish..I think you have done a great job with this piece about your dad...good luck in the contest...freda
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I am a Breast Cancer Survivor so can relate to this one
I didn't take the last chemo treatment I got so sick..Next yr I
will be in remission 5 yrs they say you have it licked if you get past 5 yrs but I still have my lingering doubts, I am a miracle I guess survived that and 2 bad car wrecks
Like Renne said will hold you up in prayer
And an excellent emotional write
Hugs
Hoping you come see me also
Susan~~~
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My mom had cancer of the throat some 25 or 30 years ago, she was turning black from the Chemo, lost all her hair.... She stopped the therapy and we all prayed for healing. She's been in remission for about 25, 26 years. Give it to God. He can work miracles. In all cases, it is in His hands. This is touching, and happens in far too many families. I will hold you both up in prayer. Be blessed. Excellent emotional write.
Much Love,
Renee
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great and sad
Such a sad piece great written and touching Your write is so emotionally . Keep self and keep writing. Anna -
wow.. well he must be a very strong man! he seems strong.. yes.. this is a very great write.. i liked the dialogue.. and the emotion.. well i hope he keeps holding on.. and great joob!!!
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aww my prayers are with you , as for the struggle it is something that one has to find the inner strength for , I know because I have faced breast cancer. The thing that is the worse in your case , everyone thinks of their father's as superman. They are the strong , and able ones . I wish you peace with this , and comfort . Remember the good days, Be Safe , Catressa
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I remember when one of my family members was diagnosed with cancer... it was just like this. All we could do was watch a formerly strong, vibrant woman just deteriorate under the weight of chemotherapy and surgery. You have my sincerest wishes for the best for whoever it is in your life that inspired you to write this. Best of luck!
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I don't know how some people deal with cancer. I've never had to. I pray that you will receive the comfort you need. Beautiful write.
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