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r.s.v.p.

I wait for the bloom
 of scented winds,

silky sunsets
 that whisper

    Dream
 into my eyes...

I live again
 in these moments---

not alone, not lonely...

I dance in the dust
 of Memory Past

& kick off my shoes
 for Love...

I am here...

 I am breathing...

    I wait for you...


       July 20, 2004
          5:10 p.m.
           

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One of four poems I wrote in only  half an hour...awesome feeling...

Written July 20th, 2004

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  • Night Hope gold member
    August 29, 2004
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    Thank you, again!!! Happy to know you've enjoyed
    the readings...I appreciate your Time...
    ~~~ Wanda ~~

  • Night Hope gold member
    August 29, 2004
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    Thanks, Lady Poet! Appreciate the visit & kind
    words...no, the 'timing' isn't that impressive...it
    had just been awhile since the Muse had hit me quite
    THAT hard up~side my head!!! hehehe & not so much
    on the 'tip of my tongue'...I have always said, I only
    hold the pen...the vessel through which it's poured,
    not the SOURCE itself...Thanks again!!!
    ~~~ Wanda ~~~

  • ish174
    August 28, 2004
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    This i very sweet! I'm really starting to pick up on your style. The best work that anyone writes comes from the heart.. and for u to write it in just a half an hour isnt impressive timely, but because it is on the tip of your tongue, and from with in. Great work hun..

  • sxyvxn3779
    August 28, 2004
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    emotive and well-written... nice work...

  • Night Hope gold member
    August 8, 2004
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    Thank you, very much!!!...Wanda

  • swiftlyblue
    August 7, 2004
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    Very sweet and emotional. Pretty, hon.

  • Night Hope gold member
    July 25, 2004
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    Thanks, my Friend...swan

  • TheSmileInHerEyes
    July 25, 2004
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    oooo... this is very nice. I loved it. Simple but wonderful. Great job. Thanx for entering. Rock On. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Amanda~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

  • Night Hope gold member
    July 21, 2004
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    In reply to your uh, interesting questions...LOL!!!...1) YES. 2) YES! & 3) most definitely, YESSS!!!...your comment, 'silky sunsets that whipser'... whips her, who!?! LOL, ROFLMAO...hehehe...(sorry, but then again...not REALLY!!!)...OH, I BE FOR PLAYING HARD TODAY, YOU BETCHA!!! {laughing tears in my eyes, OH YEAH!!!)...PC is playing nice today & letting ME play again!!! lol...YIPPEE!!!...your comment, 'want fifty of them' (chocolate bars)... ...are ya ASKING or are ya OFFERING?!?...lmao AGAIN!!! hehehe...& complex? The answer to THAT is 'Yes! Please!'...thanks EVER SO MUCH for your visit...didn't think I'd seen ya in awhile!! Nice to know you're 'in da 'hood'!!! LOL...be well...swan
    Edited on Jul 21, 5:17 p.m. because 'ijit @ wheel...still...LOL!'.

  • July 21, 2004
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    Whoa! There is a smell here somewhere, have you taken your shoes off or is there a hole in my shoes? Smells like time travelling cake. Actually silky sunsets that whipser makes me think of chocolate bar - whisper mmm nice I want fifty of them

  • Night Hope gold member
    July 21, 2004
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    Explain what, baby? You GOT it!!! That's EXACTLY what it means...Thanks for fine compliments {blushes}...swan

  • Nour Beydoun
    July 21, 2004
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    Ok not sure of what rsvp means.. but in french it's repondez s'il vous plait.. mean answer if you please.. so please explain this to me birdy!!!
    I love the poem .. one of your best!
    Nour-

  • Night Hope gold member
    July 20, 2004
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    Thanks! Glad for it! Ok, I think I will!...(Tonya, I am SO onery sometimes!!!) hehehe..swan

  • -Ask me- I dare you
    July 20, 2004
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    Cute poem!! I loved it!!!! Keep it up!!!
    ~tonya~
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