Why would I value paper gold?
Why are points of worth to me?
Is glamour or reward things to behold?
Why would I value paper gold?
Do honors add to my life a hundredfold?
Will your words of praise make me holy?
Why would I value paper gold?
Why are points of value to me?
Author notes
My first Triolet. Did I do it right?
Written August 6th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Why I dont want to win this contest by SgtJump.
400 points, ended August 7, 2004, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Interesting for you chose here for this poem about why you don't want to win gold in the contest. Easy to read and understand.
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I'm a fledgling at triolets, but it sure looks like one to me.
A darn good one at that. Why are we so pleased when we win a "virtual" trophy and points that can't be converted to coin outside these cyber walls? But we are; aren't we
~Willow~ -
looks like a triolet to me; but I'm not positive. A very good write for a ghastly contest.
Absinthe
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yes they would.
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