Lust
Over
Victory
Everlasting
Author notes
I was in no mood to write a love poem and had no plans to enter this contest. Then I came up with this walking to the train. In my bitter twisted thoughts, I thought I could enter a short sarcastic poem. What came from my thoughts was something profound and deeply personal. Go figure. 
If you are a reader who tries to figure out what the author meant. Forget it. This is too personal. Some of my closest friends who know my darkest secrets might understand this if I explained it. If however, it means something to you, the reader, it would be nice to know.
Written August 10th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Hearts Desires by PurpleSky.
300 points, ended August 25, 2004, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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I have read this and I thank you for entering. If all rules have been followed I will be commenting after the contest has closed. So just in general I am asking everyone to just take a quick look again and make sure the rules are followed. good luck
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Thanks for reading. I don't expect to win anything. I don't expect many to get much out of this. It is very personal. On empowering the spirit (that comment is only here for the contest), I think the opposite is true but an argument could be made for both. After all God IS love and God IS spirit.
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I like this in form. The theme is briefly diagnosed.
re: Your last comment. Love that is born in the spirit would have to be ignited to prolong its health. Once we are born-again, that is.
Anyhow. I wish you the best on this! Warmly, CookieZeal
Edited on Aug 11, 10:30 because ''.
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