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I Fear ( Cinquain )

I fear
Man's opinion
Failing my own standards
But perfect love casts out all fear
I love

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My first cinquain
Written August 25th, 2004

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  • Sandygram silver member
    August 26, 2004
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    This was a terrific cinquain. I love the message, yes perfect love conquers all. It's just so hard to find, except for our Dear t Lord. Take care, Sandy BEAUTIFUL POEM
  • pozo
    August 26, 2004
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    Wow- a great poem which I liked a lot, such an excellent cinquain and so well written Keep writing because this was great