I thought I saw you
Heart wrenching moment
I blinked and looked again
Blood pumping faster now
I called your name
Across the crowds
Palpatations racing
I imagined your lips on mine
I decided to run to your arms
My head was spinning, veins exploding
I touched the nape of your neck
You looked into my eyes
In a moment of insanity
It wasn't you..cardiac arrest----------------
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Written July 10th, 2002
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lol lol you a great
humor writer
i appreciate this
its great
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hahahahz oh dear lord, thats so not the type of thing to joke about
hahaha, it did made me laugh!!
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lol, but then you never know you just might meet the right one by accident lol
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been so close to doing this myself
but think of what the stranger was thinking!
'oh my god! I'm being attacked by a woman!' lol, would have given a week of my life to see the look on his face :D -
excellent
Not at all the ending I expected (I think I missed the humor part at the top) You gave me a smile I needed more than anything today. I've done this before as well, you are not alone. :) Great write, I loved it. -
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ummmmm NurseChilly, you seem familiar to me...
Oh wait I'm thinking of the nurse that shoved the needle in my butt yesterday.
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no sleep too much caffiene and a head fullof useless stuff lmao..but it,s all coming out nowwwwwwwww.lmao..love ya hon thanks Val..~GILL~
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LOL ok I want some of what you're on NOWWWWWWWW. ~~~Val -
Lmao thanks for the comments Prue and Elyse..you two following each other..lol..hahaaaaha.~GILL~
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excellent
LMAO...that would be embarrassing...tho, guess you could have made a new friend...LOL A really fun read!! :) -
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hahaha im sorry that me laugh so hard. good poem though
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Thanks Prue and Hide..yepp even do it now..but thats old timers disease..lmao..~GILL~
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don't touch it!
I like this,
Haven't we all been there at some time.
Good write.
Andrew -
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cute..really fun .. :)
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