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The Great Escape

Digging my way with a spoon
Going to get there
Get there soon

I can see daylight shining
Going to get there
Get there soon

One more shift and then I'm done
Going to get there
Get there soon

Another 11 hours of babysitting blues
Going to get there
Get there soon

Damn it! my spoon broke in two
May take me longer to get there
Hope I can get there soon

Found the duct tape, mended the spoon
There is a God..daylight..not the moon
I got there...Snzzzzzzzzzzzzoooze

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Written July 13th, 2002

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  • raggyann
    December 16, 2007
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    i think your great
    god bless you


  • coffee-agh
    July 23, 2002
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    excellent

    I've gotta get out more, I can relate to this piece. Seriously another well done -tj-
  • Joey
    July 15, 2002
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    excellent

    That was a very good poem and
    I plan on reeding more of yours.
    Thank you for shareing that...
  • Bigheadbob
    July 14, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    i actually like working nights. call me crazy if you must. but its a good release. plus i get and extra 75 cents an hour. oh well great poem.

  • NurseChilly gold member
    July 14, 2002
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    thanks guys for the comments..I should be able to change my tune now..off for a whole week..Ian I need to get up ar 1 pm today hon...will I hear your clock from Salford lol..~~~GILL~~~

  • July 13, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    lol so what time you want your alarm clock set for :)
  • AngelTina
    July 13, 2002
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    neutral

    very entertaining!
    you're a good thinker!

  • July 13, 2002
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    neutral

    Sometimes I go to my car during lunch break and sleep for 45 minutes.
  • soulful
    July 13, 2002
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    neutral

    night shifts get to ya after awhile.. i did it for a year and said no more,,got to the point where sleep wouldn't come so i had a night job and day job..you will get there

  • NurseChilly gold member
    July 13, 2002
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    thanks JB-rho..I loved it too..seen it so many times I,m in it now...lmao..but I,m escaping from work tmro at 8am..lol..i,m outta there lol...~~GILL~~
  • JB-rho
    July 13, 2002
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    excellent

    Good stuff...one of my fav. movies of all time.

  • NurseChilly gold member
    July 13, 2002
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    lmao I will hon..last one to go..wooohooooo...~~~GILL~~~

  • July 13, 2002
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    neutral

    lol hang in there........

    ~Gayla~
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