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A Pierced Nose...(Haiku)

Hurt like bloody hell...
But I was Forty!..so what!!
Friend puked outside....

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Written July 22nd, 2002

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  • sock monkey silver member
    October 3, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Owie. This is funny!
  • Valkricry
    July 28, 2002
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    excellent

    OMG toooo funny! lol Val

  • Judas Denied
    July 26, 2002
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    excellent

    Hilarious! I have my septum pierced and I never even cringed, but my sister was with me and she screamed whne they stuck the needle in. It was a great experience. Tee-hee.
  • Pataliyah
    July 23, 2002
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    excellent

    got the top of my ear pierced...but it never would heal right...

  • twisted butterfly
    July 23, 2002
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    excellent

    heehee youre silly gill

    ~Lisa~

  • July 23, 2002
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    excellent

    Oh yeah, it hurt like hell!!

    I hit 30 and something happened. lol

    Got my tat for my 30th,
    my nose pierced for my 31st,
    my navel for my 32nd
    my nipples for my 33rd(OMG now that's a pain like you've never felt. I nearly ripped the vinyl off the table. LOL)
    for my 34th.... well... *winks*

    *smiles
    CM

  • myrataal silver member
    July 23, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    So comtemporary LOL good one too ...

    NURSE CHILLY: Poem on your commenton my poem 'Cameo':

    Haiku for Gill

    muse of the blue sea
    tenderly undressing shells
    souls begin to sing

    Lovely Gill, if a man returns a woman's love, he returns herself to her as a cameo ... making him and her whole

  • fantastix
    July 23, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    lol OUCHY! You're a brave soldier! :) Thanks for the invite by the way I was actually on my way over... :0) You write good stuff. I have to try a haiku.
  • Bigheadbob
    July 23, 2002
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    excellent

    ah to be drunk and 40 again... wait im 18. well to be drunk. great poem.
  • Sprocket
    July 23, 2002
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    neutral

    what a pretty thing
    all shiny dazzling brightness
    beauty trades in pain

    cute but ewwww about the um er upchuck LOL :)

  • NurseChilly gold member
    July 23, 2002
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    Giant eh??? lmao..still rolling on the floor..lmao..thanks for the comments...everyone..~~~GILL~~~~

  • naninina
    July 22, 2002
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    neutral

    Cool.
    Yeah the background is a perfect one to go with the poem.
    You go girl!!

  • July 22, 2002
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    neutral

    LOLOL@ the background pic with this..perfect!
  • StrmDncr
    July 22, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    hehehehehehehe....

  • Windsong
    July 22, 2002
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    neutral

    oh, i love the poem! never tried this!

  • Windsong
    July 22, 2002
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    excellent

    ok, you have succeeded in making me feel like a giant!!!!!! you and my other friend, shortie! yes, soul, i am talking about you! actually kelly is into this too......what is this a conspiracy to make feel big and clumsy???????
    ok, i am (and very proud of it) 5'10 and i love wearing high heels. ok, is all out, so deal with it! *makind faces at you*
  • shapeshifter
    July 22, 2002
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    neutral

    Odd, funny, and stimulating the imagination...typical of you. Enjoyed.
  • soulful
    July 22, 2002
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    neutral

    Oh Gill you said a mouthful ... have a ten pound baby and you will know pain and no drugs,,, feel that pain ,,,ya never forget lol.... i'm five foot even and still i'm not getting my nose peirced lol

  • NurseChilly gold member
    July 22, 2002
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    Wimp!!!! wimp!!! go and have a baby and see what real pain is..lmao..then ya can call me wimp..lmao..ya can call me dimp..cause I,m only 4ft11 lmao..but NEVER WIMP..hehehheeeeeee

  • July 22, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    hehehe ya wimp lolol
    had mine done years ago
    and i never cried,
    honest i didn't!
    i din't i tell you :|

    *stomps off in a sulk -
    tears ready to burt out :)

  • AndrewHide silver member
    July 22, 2002
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    excellent

    A friend indeed is,
    a friend with a plastic bag,
    and very clean shoes.

    Andrew

  • Ocean Gypsy silver member
    July 22, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    LOLOL! That's all I can say..:o)

  • NurseChilly gold member
    July 22, 2002
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    sorry to dissapoint you Monk...but yeppppp only my nose lol..bloody hell that put me off anything else..lmao...

  • haikumonk gold member
    July 22, 2002
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    neutral

    What are we talking here?????? hehe Hope we're just talking about a nose!!!!!!!
    Monk
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