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Oh! My Love

I am a fool in love with you
and this is what I had to do
I am as serious as can be
so please won't you also love me?

If only you could know
how very much I love you
It would relieve the pain and sorrow
and bring on a promising tomorrow

We have know each other for a very long time
but I could never say that you were mine
We can through love become one
because you are second to none.

If only just for an instant
I could hold you in my arms
you would feel my heart pound
like a thousand alarms.

Your beauty absorbs my every thought
and your elegance enraptures me totally
Your feelings for me seem to be naught
but a true romance is what I want for you and me

Even though you have such a discerning gaze
watching you sets my heart ablaze
Your smile is mystically divine
Oh! Won't you please become mine?

Author notes

In 1992 I was in my final year of high school. My best friend's sister has just started high school and she was growing up so fast. The 2nd poem written for Juanita.
Written December 1st, 1992

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  • sfesquivel
    October 10, 2005
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    Nice write! Ur rhyming is good. Simple yet it tickled me. Keep on penning and I would love to see ur new works. Good luck...