Take me home for one last drink..(Adult)
by NurseChilly on 15 hours ago [print] [edit]
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Genre: Contemp/Mainstream.
Challenge Description: i want you to write a poem off of this title: 'take me home for one last drink' :) Nam (100 points)
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A "slow comfortable screw against the wall"
Will do
Just add a slice of lemon
Ooh and ice too
A "Harvey Wallbanger"
To follow
Just to get you in the mood
Make your "Banana Banshee"
And I'll be your " Bahama Mama"
Feel the "Black velvet"
Soothing your lips
Take me home, baby....
Take me now
I,ll be your "Blue Lagoon"
Dive right in the water is fine
Is that one drink to many
Can you swim in an ocean divine
Take me home
And I,ll show you how to shake my cocktail
I had a great time
A hair of the dog would be divine
Hello.."Bloody Mary"
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Written July 28th, 2002
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I wasn't allowed any Jack then..ROFL..I had caused too many fights..
hehehheehheheheheeheheh will tell ya one day..
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What about Jack, huh? WHAT ABOUT JACK??? I am so upset right now I am near tears. sniffle If someone offered me a whole fifth of that magic, I would let them take me home for one last drink or fifteen. However, I would only be using them for their booze. I am a much more clever lush than the rest.
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don't touch it!
LOL Sis
Loved this
Bahama Mama
hadnt heard this forever
Rolling here
Love ya Sis
FOREVER~~~~~ -
excellent
hic.......I can only drink one, so make it a long one.
Hehehehe, great write again Gill. -
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Ok, you drive, i'm already plastered! But...will you please be gentle? -
don't touch it!
hehehe mmmmmmmmm
bloody mary,
good drink for vamps lol :) -
thanks all for the great comments,,made me get my shaker out..got the ice..all I need now is some booze and a man..lol...heheeeehee..~~~GILL~~~
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what a fantastic ending, great read from a great writer. Si. -
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yer fruity bird ya roflmao great stuff -
excellent
What are all those thingybobs in quotation makes up there.
Is those thing that drinkypoostuff
Some them sound like fun...hehe
doh
Hugs...Eddy
Edited on May 19, 1:23 p.m. because ''. -
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LOVE THIS! I'd probably get lost on the way to the meeting. (Of minds and bodies) Come up empty handed. Fun write. Bill -
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I agree...very clever indeed. I love it. It's definitely different than mine, but, he didn't say that it had to be any style, so who knows. Good luck girlie. I enjoyed this. Now, if only I had the money, the man, the time, the patience, and the blood sugar level for all that alcohol, I'd be fine. haha. I sure could use it all right now. Oh well> Grea piec.e HUGGLES. -
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Dead clever, loved it. -
excellent
lmao
nooooooooo not the bloody mary
what a dampener on any evening
lmao
goood one Gilly
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LOL oh chilly...you lush you ;) loved it. Val -
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Very amusing.
Make mine a double...... -
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LOL This is the 'Crown Royal' of good drinking humor. A 'Chablis' of fun reads!! Such a 'premier 101' presentation!!!!
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LMAO Gill....you did it again...you and your sense of humor...:P
~Gayla~ -
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just a pinch and a twist and there ya go.
:0)
Nam -
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I dont know whether to laugh or be grosed out....
think im doin both!!! Loved it!!!!!! -
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*Laughing* I'm too tired, I feel like a zombie. Great chuckle Gill. Thank you -tj-
You might like the mushy one 'Streams Unite' a gift for two close friends.
Edited by coffee-agh on right now because 'spell check'.
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