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Breathe..(Haiku)

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Baby Oil..A Man
What more do you need today???
Breathe in..chest out...

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Written August 3rd, 2002

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  • Judas Denied
    September 21, 2003
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    Erotic haikus. Now I have truly seen it all. lol This is neat, brings to mind a lot of most TITillating image. Hehe Do me you fiery wench.

  • Lapis Rose
    August 19, 2002
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    neutral

    Mm, mm, good, hmmmm.... v e r y cute!! lol Nice poem too. LOLOLOL

  • Rubee
    August 6, 2002
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    excellent

    LMAO.......cute..very cute!!!!

  • Zez
    August 6, 2002
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    excellent

    oh jees, what have i wandered into? hehehe

  • Ocean Gypsy silver member
    August 4, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Nice...;o)

  • coffee-agh
    August 4, 2002
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    excellent

    'She tells me she only married me for her body' Not really sure what it all means. -tj-

  • Lurie
    August 4, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Hmmmm kind looks Like Dan!!! Where's the baby oil!!!!

  • haikumonk gold member
    August 4, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.............

  • Lish
    August 4, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    *l* Nice write, Gill. :)

  • fantastix
    August 4, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    MMM hmmm, why can't I wake up to HIM every morning? lol Great Write!
  • xliz23x
    August 4, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    lol ok this was cute

    liz

  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    August 4, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    hunka hunka buring love
    geez this aint Elvis
    loved it sis~~~~~~~
    Susan
  • EmptySoul
    August 3, 2002
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    excellent

    Nice a** wouldn't mind rubbing baby oil on that. Oh yeah, and great poem too!
    :o)Desiree
    P.S. When you're finished with him please send him my way. Thanks muchly!

  • August 3, 2002
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    neutral

    wow this is really chilly
    great poem Gill

    mari

  • August 3, 2002
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    excellent

    That looks like me!!!! 20 years ago... LOL
    fun read Gill!!

  • Maltese Falcon
    August 3, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Ohhhhhhhhhhh Matron! Baby oil does it for me.

  • NurseChilly gold member
    August 3, 2002
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    lmao at all the comments...whose knicked my baby oil..fess up..robbing swines..hahahaahaa~~~GILL~~~

  • heinzs silver member
    August 3, 2002
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    excellent

    I'm not sure I need a man... but I guess I'm willing to try anything once *grin*.
  • Robbo
    August 3, 2002
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    excellent

    i leave quickly, embarressed by this peice.
    lol.

  • Manicmuze
    August 3, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Mmmm.....yummy :-)
    Nice side dish to my morning coffee !

  • Ava Noire silver member
    August 3, 2002
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    neutral

    *ahem* this is sooooooooo cuuuuuuute!

    & the poem is great too! ;)

  • August 3, 2002
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    excellent

    hahaha... a little oil for my body please rub me just right *winks*

  • August 3, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    :) where'd you get that pic of me from lol :)

  • August 3, 2002
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    excellent

    lol donnz....

    very provoking Gill...*winks*

    ~Gayla~

  • donnz
    August 3, 2002
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    excellent

    I need a nurse, preferably with slow warm' hands

  • Nam
    August 3, 2002
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    excellent

    so, where is the baby oil?

    :0)

    Nam
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