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Relax..(Haiku)

Relax, one more shift
One last time,daylight sleeping
Till the next ones....

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lmao...usually get nites once a month..lol..expect more of this silliness...lmao...
Written August 14th, 2002

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  • Abscessed
    April 8, 2005
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    hehe i think all of us can relate to this ....we all feel that urge to kick off our shoes and relax. You have really done a great job with this...adding a dash of humour to your haiku writing as well
    unique...i like your style!!!

  • leahcullen
    August 26, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Kool poem!!!! I hope you aint tooo tired!! You might fall asleep on a patient!! ;) Then again, Im sure some patients wouldnt mind that too much!! ;) Hee hee Kool poem missey, Luv, Lee
  • raindrop
    August 18, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    The dreaded night shift, what's worse- the dreaded switching back and forth.. can't they just pick one so the body can get used to it!!!

  • Lurie
    August 17, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Boy do I know this feeling! And those back to back shifts are the worst!
  • boiledeggs
    August 17, 2002
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    excellent

    I like them haikus, short and sweet *smiles

  • FallinTears
    August 15, 2002
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    excellent

    Great job!
  • F Etc
    August 15, 2002
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    excellent

    Ah the damn nite shift
    Sleeping on your feet but still
    You're a great nurse, Gill

    w00! i haiku'd
    be proud of me :)

  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    August 14, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    nigh night sis
    umm dodn't let the bedbugs bite
    rollling
    you better chat with me soon and read my newer ones
    Blessings
    Your sis Susan~~~~
  • Valkricry
    August 14, 2002
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    excellent

    nitey-nite...wonder if you dream in verse? Val

  • catz Moderators member
    August 14, 2002
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    excellent

    Yeah, just one more, you'll make it though, you nurses just seem to keep going.. and going.... and going.... I think you're all realated to that bunny : )
    Dee

  • August 14, 2002
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    excellent

    want some toothpicks to hold your eyes open? lol

  • NurseChilly gold member
    August 14, 2002
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    thanks all, and don't worry Gayla..I,m ok..I will chat to you tmro hon..I promise..../f/f/f/f
    Edited by NurseChilly on right now.

  • August 14, 2002
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    neutral

    oh poor Gill...you sound like you are worn out...and where do I find you? On AP of course! LMAO!!!

    pssst...don't forget about the site...lots of new members to welcome in....
    ~Gayla~

  • Nam
    August 14, 2002
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    neutral

    working at night is the best.

    :0)

    Nam

  • coffee-agh
    August 14, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Off 2 nite again. Keep the chin up -tj-

    Gill I did a bit of a mind rocker 'Liquid Love'
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