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The Way Of Life

Even before I was born
I was doomed to die

-only the mainstream and
manipulated survive

Author notes

hmmm...yes....short....
Written December 23rd, 2004

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  • ms-vengeance
    February 20, 2005
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    "some of us are really born to die"
    awesome.....
  • daisychainsaw
    December 27, 2004
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    Short...but interesting....i think it would be effective if you had ..... after the last line. But you know i talk crap so yeah but erm yeah great write erm yeah.
    jessica
    xxxx