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I'm not a professional- yet.

 

Please refrain from posting nasty comments-

( because I critique honestly.)

 I never claim to be an expert on poetry,

 but I will not hesitate to voice my opinions.

If there is a poem/story/song that

 you would like some constructive criticism on,

I will be more than happy to put in my two cents.

 

Thank you,

~Lindsay

 

 

 

"My Ap 'Significant Other'"

 

 Soccer-Freak-Tyler

 

 

"My Ap 'AllthepeopleImcheatingonTylerwith(wishiwas)'"

 

 

Dressed In Spines

Blackday

9 Crimes

 

...and I'm too lazy to think who else. lol

 

 

"My Ap 'Iftheywerementheywouldbeinthegroupbeforethis'"

 

 

bad resolution

DancingRed

Diseased Mind

Whispered Devotions

Celtic Moon

Blackwidow43

Blkwidow77

Whispered Melissa

Finding Fate

eh...

 

I'll finish this list later, it's long. lol

 

 

 

  

Contest Wise,

my proudest achievements:

 

Third Place:

Teen Idol Season One (by Soccer-Freak-Tyler)

 

Second Place:

 Teen Idol 4: Allstars (Also by Soccer-Freak-Tyler)

 

Second Place:

AP Best of The Best Season Two (by B Chandler)

 

Fifth Place:

 Litournament Season Five  (by 9 Crimes)

 

more to come... I hope.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  • Last seen on Nov 6 9:06 AM. Member since February 15, 2005.
  • I'm a hidden phosphate poet for 5139 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "I'm all that's left. Or, maybe,..all that ever was....".
  • I am a 17 year old girl from Alaska (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm McDonald's Crew Member.
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  • I have 5,139 comments, 32 contests, 2 addlines, 2 columns

My Poetry

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  • Sight
    I see vivid variations
    of our lilting love:
    12 lines, 8 comments, March 31. In Love
  • Diet
    instincts had died:
    they'd collapsed into ourselves
    27 lines, 4 comments, March 30. In Society
  • promises plucked away
    Forget-me-nots forgotten they'd wilted on the nightstand;
    8 lines, 1 comment, March 30
  • I Thought
    I thought I'd become water:
    the notion knew me well,
    18 lines, March 30. In Personal

My Stories

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My other items

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  • Column: QUITTING THE SITE at allpoetry
    I'm quitting the site, though who'd like to keep contact with me, post your contact information here.

Guest Book

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  • serval on May 10
    i love how youve been cheating on tyler for like 2 years. and im the only straight guy


    oh yeah. i have 7 million accounts. but im the one and only ds.
  • Ryno on April 9
    Well my name used to be Forever Ryan.
  • Ryno on April 7
    You probably dont remember me.

    But I'm happy your writing again.
  • birch on April 1
    i love you booboo kitten. it's justin, marrow.

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