Hey everyone im 16 years old my names stephen. hope you enjoy my poetry please take the time to read and comment on my works any advice would be much appreciated thanks.
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AP MOTHER and guardian angel jackie allpeotry/kiwigirljacks
AP SIS allpoetry/wildhorse
- Last seen 1 day ago. Member since October 24, 2007.
- I'm a carnelian hope poet for 125 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "the weather changes and so do people don't judge".
- I am a 16 year old guy (Great Britain)
- When I'm not writing, I'm playing basketball .
- I am in the groups A Group For Idiots and Random People, Music Rules My Soul, anyone can join
- I have 125 comments, 2 contests
Poems I'm focused on
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How am i suppose to act.
When i see you slipping away from sight. -
i think about you all day
everyday29 lines, 7 comments, November 13, 2007 -
i count to 1, 2, 3 then i say wow that was easy
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You don't know me
no one know's me
My Poetry
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"Momentarily chasing dreams is just a way to forget the world for awhile."
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The world spins a wiery web.
Of lust, anguish.
Guest Book
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Immortal Obscurity on June 9Thanks for your lovely comment on my poem
And I must add that your pieces are far better than what I wrote at 15.
My writing was terrible when I was your age, all cheesy and plastic-y, manufactured teen-pop garbage
But when I grew into my gothic phase, around 17-18 or so, my writing got better, because it was all me and not this fake crap I'd written to impress English teachers and everyone else.
You'll find your niche too, trust me
Thanks again.
Laura x -
BlackEmo : =]]] on March 15Hey what's up ...how you been? what you doing?
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kiwigirljacks on November 6, 2007Hey hey... thought I'd swing by and leave a comment. I'm really enjoying reading your poetry. You write well beyond your years and with raw emotion which I just love! Keep writing hun!
And thanks for the comments on mine... lots of love xx
