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                                                NEWS FLASH:

           DUDE I JUST GOT BRACES AND THEY FREAKING HURT!!!!!!!!!!

 

 

 

 

Hey sorry i haven't been on i really lost my touch for poetry. I mean i can't write very well. I have been so caugh up in my book.

 

Hey I'm Ruth.   Waz up?

 

 

 

 

Ok I'm gonna make this short and sweet:

My poems are probably not as good as yours but to make them better you can comment and give me some advise. Helpful critizisim is fine but don't like totally bash the poem please! Oh and I really suck at spelling!!! So if you fine errors with spelling point them out and show me the correct way.

 

 

Thanks

<~Ruth~>

 

 

                                    My thoughts right now...........

 

 

  *I'm borred*

 

                                       *Me wanna talk to someone!*

       *Anyone?*

                                  *How bout u?*

 

   *Awwww come on! Help the borred*

 

 

                                                                        *Grrrr whatever*

                                                              *Ur mean*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*wait really talk to me!!!!!!*

                                   *Please?*

 

 

Poems I'm focused on

My Poetry

1 - 4 of 70   Show all Search
  • I need someone
    17 lines, 4 comments, September 25
  • I'M DONE!
    18 lines, 5 comments, September 4
  • I'm done
    15 lines, 6 comments, August 23
  • I'm not the same person I used to be
    I don't know anyone
    15 lines, 4 comments, August 20

My Stories

  • July 19, 1972 / Well he's finally come to his senses. We can go on the flight. Yea it's going to be hectic, but I know we're going to make it. My father is at his second lesson at the moment. I'll be back later. /
    92 lines, 1 comment, June 7, 2007. In <600 words
  • August 10, 1972 / Sorry I didn't right yesterday. I was busy helping my dad with the balloon. Not much happened though. Today we were almost blown off coarse due to the strong winds in Michigan. If fact I almost fel
    260 lines, 1 comment, June 7, 2007. In <600 words
  • A Dare-Devil and Her Father / A story of a dare devil and her father and the her tragic death / Layla's diary / May 28,1972 / Well today was the worst day I have ever lived t
    311 lines, 3 comments, June 6, 2007. In <600 words

Guest Book

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  • Creating Darkness on October 9
    Hello Ruth,
    Well, you probably dont know me, but I want to change that! See, I am ur sister!! (Dun dun dun... dramatic background music)... hehe .... well I am ur sister according to the contest u entered! My name is Sydney and I look forward to chatting with you!!
    Love your sister,
    Sydney
  • God is my reality on October 8
    Dropping by to show ur page so love so here it is...........LLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! Hehe. Sry I'm bored. Can't wait to read some new stuff!
  • Alyzeh on September 26
    Oh wow! Your page! I uploaded that, hehe! Love it
  • RawrrKat on August 20
    I LOVE BUTTERFLY DDR! lol and LP of course but ♥ DDR

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